"You say you wish to make war on us. You say there will be bloodshed and strife. You say that there will be hunger, and sorrow, and countless deaths. Tell us, then... how is this different from life in the desert? "Bring your warriors. We do not fear them." - al'Kezzin response to the Children of the Wind -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- Plush Expendable Griever Studios presents a Rocketarian Pictures production in association with Improfanfic Suikoden: Distant Shores started by Illyria and Todd Harper Part 12: Winds from Distant Lands by Brian Stricklin -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- The hunting had not been good, but that was no surprise - few game animals were willing to come this close to the castle. Still, he was philosophical about it; while somewhat stringy, the large squirrel-like creature he *had* caught was a veritable banquet compared to the average day's catch back home. He was a bit puzzled by the rather festive red cape it had been wearing, but it made a handy napkin. As he chewed on one of its legs, fastidiously wiping his mouth between bites, his eyes fell on the castle itself. Perhaps, he considered, he should try again in the morning. His wounds were healed now - well, mostly healed - and he'd managed to get quite far in his last attempt before being driven out. Of course, the further he got, the harder it was to escape if things got too difficult, but at least that kept it interesting... A slight rustling in the underbrush caught his attention, and he glanced down from the branch he occupied. Three figures, one leading a horse along the overgrown path, were passing below him and moving in the direction of the castle. Judging from the way they were chattering, they had no clue that anyone was watching them. He shrugged and took another delicate bite of meat. It was nearing sundown now, and there would be time enough to deal with them in the morning. Unless, of course, they decided to enter the castle during the night, in which case he wouldn't have given much for their chances. Either way, a meal was not something to be interrupted. The scrawny leg was halfway to his mouth when the stink hit him. Immediately he dropped the meat and his hand fell instinctively to his weapon. One of *them*? *Here*?! -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- "So, explain again why this impressive castle has been abandoned for twenty years?" "Politics." "It figures." When Alaric, Kyrina, and Baren had first reached the top of the plateau, seeing the legendary White Cloud Castle spread out before them against a majestic mountain range and reflected in a silver lake, they were indeed impressed. Then, as they worked their way around the lake and drew closer to the ancient edifice, they began to take note of the damage it had suffered. While it hadn't been vacant long enough for erosion and the effects of weather to take their toll, there were numerous battle scars, ruined towers, and other ravages of war. "When White Cloud was first constructed," Kyrina explained, "two small contingents of soldiers, one from each region, were stationed within. They were just 'token' forces, mainly serving as honor guards while the diplomats did all the important work. In time, however, the lure of a well-situated fortress at the edge of their rival's territory proved too powerful to resist." Baren snorted. "So who made the first move?" The archer smirked slightly in response. "That depends on who you talk to; each government insists that their counterpart made the first attack. But whether it was Tir Eselyn or Lierstam that started the conflict, the end result was a vicious struggle for control that lasted seven years. Each side lost hundreds, even thousands of soldiers in the various sieges and skirmishes, and control of White Cloud changed over at least four times. Finally, after a massive battle that decimated attacker and defender alike, a truce was declared, and both governments removed their forces from the castle. Ten years later, when the Treaty was signed, they agreed to leave White Cloud vacant, to prevent the same thing from happening again." Alaric considered this. "That explains the damage, anyway." "Quite so. And the more I think about it, the more it seems that this is an excellent choice for a new base for our army." "How so?" She shrugged. "Both Heresha and Lierstam would like control of White Cloud, but neither wants to break the Treaty... at least, not until they're ready. Instead, they both keep an eye on their rival, to make sure they don't occupy it themselves. If one side were to move their forces in to occupy the castle, the other would know about it." Behind her, the massive Child of the Wind frowned thoughtfully. "But if Heresha discovers we're moving our troops in..." "They won't," Kyrina assured him. "As far as White Cloud is concerned, they'll be paying full attention to Lierstam. Why watch their own lands for military activity?" "Makes sense." He nodded briefly, then the frown returned. "Hold on... if that's the case, then wouldn't the reverse be true?" "That Lierstam *will* notice us? Yes, I think we can count on having to deal with them at some point, but if we can convince them that Heresha is our enemy, we shouldn't have much to worry about. And even when Heresha finds out where we are, it will take some time before they work up their nerve to send their army against us, with Lierstam keeping such close watch on them." Alaric regarded the young part-elf with new respect. "How is it you know so much about White Cloud?" Kyrina smiled, a bit sadly. "Senrou and I discussed it once, though he considered it a potential threat rather than a base of operations. It's too far away from Lindael, or so he said." She lapsed into silence, then after a moment Alaric hesitantly placed a hand on her shoulder. "I'm sorry." She shrugged. "It's all right. This is a war, after all - casualties are to be expected. It's just that-" A ferocious snarl behind them made the two warriors turn around, just in time to see a red-clothed figure drop from the branches above. It landed just in front of Baren, dropping into a low crouch; his single eye widened in surprise just as the figure leapt at him, smashing into the Child of the Wind with its shoulder. Fortunately for him, the barbarian was a large man, and was somewhat less affected by the tackle than the attacker was. Moving swiftly, he unlimbered his spear and brought it up before him, managing to parry the figure's own weapon - a wickedly sharp scimitar - before it sliced into him. They stood in tableau for a moment, each straining to knock the other's weapon away in the clinch, which gave Kyrina and Alaric time enough to look at the intruder clearly. Standing at easily seven feet tall, the attacker looked for all the world like a wildcat standing upright. His head was entirely feline, though his ears sported numerous tears and punctures, and light brown, almost tan fur covered his body. Or, at least, those parts that could be seen - a large crimson robe was draped over his form, and a white turban wound about his head, stable despite his recent exertions. Ignoring the onlookers, the catman redoubled his efforts. "I almost didn't recognize your stench, Wind Child," he snarled - a very literal description, as a hint of primal roar hung from every word. "Could it be that your people have finally discovered what the word 'bathing' means?" Baren shifted his grip on the spear, and managed to force his opponent back a step. "What're you doing so far from your precious city, you mangy fleabag? This is a long way to come just to get your belly sliced open!" The catman smirked, allowing his fangs to show. "Brave words, O Devourer of Many Meals. Let us see how bravely you talk when you have no throat to speak with!" With that, he kicked Baren away, and the two began to duel in earnest. After recovering from his initial shock, Alaric lifted his staff and advanced, seeking to pin the catman between himself and Baren... only to stop in surprise when the barbarian turned an icy glare upon him between strikes. "Stay out of this, boy!" he shouted. "This is my fight, not yours!" "But...!" "The foul-smelling wretch speaks truly," the catman rumbled, glancing back at the young man. "I seek no quarrel with you or the archer, but I will brook no interference!" Baren barked a laugh. "Don't worry - I'll see that your last request is honored!" "Ooooooookay." Alaric backed up to stand next to Kyrina. "Any ideas? Or do we just wait?" He paused, then glanced at her. "Uh... Kyrina?" "I don't believe it," she murmured. "I thought they were...!" She shook her head, then looked at Alaric. "Hmm? Oh. No, I don't think we'll wait." So saying, she raised her right hand and concentrated. The Wind Rune upon it flashed with power... Suddenly a small whirlwind, carrying with it a shower of sweet-smelling petals, manifested between the two combatants. They stared at it briefly, then each one fell over in a deep, magically-induced slumber. A few minutes later they woke Baren, who was none too pleased. He glared at Kyrina angrily. "Dammit, I said not to interfere!" She was unmoved. "We have other things to do than waste time on your squabble with your friend over there." Kyrina nodded at the catman, who was securely tied nearby. "Pfeh!" He spat to the side. "He's no friend of mine. I've lost more tribesmen to his kind than I care to remember. Well... no harm done, I suppose." The barbarian picked up his spear and stood. "Come on, hold him up so I can get a clean shot at his heart..." Alaric stared at him. "You'd murder an unconscious prisoner?" Baren hesitated. "Hmm... you might be right. It probably *would* be more fun to watch the expression on his face..." "No." Kyrina stepped in front of him, glaring in annoyance. "We didn't tie him up just so you could kill him. If he's been here a while, he maybe be able to give us some important information about the castle." He snorted, then leaned against a nearby tree a bit petulantly. "Fine. Do what you want." "Besides," she continued, looking at their captive speculatively, "I'd like to find out what an al'Kezzin is doing in Hereshan lands. Especially since they're supposed to be purely mythical." -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- "It's an honor to serve with you, Lady Tavia!" "Th-thanks." "We're with you one hundred percent, Lady Tavia!" "Uh... do your best." "Hell of a speech, Lady Tavia!" "Yes... thank you..." Three days! Three days of unrelenting, heartfelt support from the troops. *Her* troops! Even now, thinking of them as being under her command was somewhat overwhelming. And there were more of them every day. Alyssa and Reid were maintaining the sweeps well, and the Sindar outpost was now hosting a full eight hundred soldiers - not enough for even a small army, but a good start. Of course, that meant extra mouths to feed, and there was only so much that could be traded from the surrounding villages. When this was added to the fact that the swamp offered little in the way of foraging, Tavia feared that, before too long, they'd reach the point where they'd have to move forward regardless, or starve to death in the ruins. Yet despite this, the troops supported her unquestioningly. She couldn't understand it, and said as much to her friends at the evening meal. "I haven't done anything to warrant this much trust in my abilities. I played a minor role in the attack on Bristow, and I couldn't keep Senrou from being killed by..." She faltered. "...the Hereshans. Why are they so eager to follow me?" "Senrou trusted you," Reid offered, laying down his bowl of stew. "That counts for quite a lot with the original revolutionaries. And you also helped convince General la Lanterne to join us, if only briefly." "And as for the Academy cadets," Lierni continued, "your tendency to coddle the younger students back at Heimdall seems to have worked in your favor. For some reason, they've come to look up to you." "And, of course, you have-" "-a True Rune," Tavia finished glumly. "I still don't see how that makes me fit to lead a horse to water, let alone an army to Lindael." Reid shrugged. "In general, those who have carried True Runes have gone on to accomplish great things. The men know this, and they want to be a part of your, well, destiny. Besides, compared to normal runes, a True Rune is like holding a broadsword while your opponent has a dagger - you aren't *guaranteed* to win, but your chances are a lot higher." "But it doesn't *do* anything," Tavia complained. "All it's ever done is protect my squad from that one magic attack, and I didn't even tell it to do so." Lierni rolled her eyes and stood up sharply. "You're being foolish again, Tavia," she said sternly. "Bemoaning your fate is not going to justify the troops' admittedly bizarre respect. You have their confidence - now you need to bolster your own." Tavia stared at her friend in surprise. "Li..." "At any rate," she continued heedlessly, "I find I've quite lost my appetite for this nourishing gruel. If you'll excuse me..." They watched her leave, then Tavia dropped her head into her hands. "I wish I'd never made that speech," she muttered. "Non, do not say that, mon capitan!" Alouette protested. "If you had not rallied the men like that, they would surely have scattered when my grandfather left us." "I know, I know... it's just that..." She hesitated, feeling their eyes upon her, then sighed. "Never mind. It's nothing." ...it was just that, despite everyone's claims that she was a natural leader, she had never been comfortable with public speaking, and certainly not with making impromptu speeches. Yet this one had come from out of nowhere, and had sparked a grand fire in the hearts and minds of the soldiers. It was... troubling. Sometimes, just every so often, she darkly suspected that the speech had come from *somewhere else*... On her hand, the Victory Rune lay inert. -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- "I," the catman began, speaking with regal dignity despite being tied to a tree, "am Kaleen ibn'Ashra, warrior of the al'Kezzin." "I thought so," Kyrina said with a smile. "I thought your people were little more than a fable, though." He raised an eyebrow. "For that matter, I was under the impression that elves were mythical creatures as well." "Point taken." Alaric turned around from setting up a campfire. "I've never heard of any... Al... Alka..." "Al'Kezzin," Kaleen provided, the word rolling fluidly from his mouth. "And no reason you should have, O Warrior of Few Summers. We are a... reclusive race." "There's been no contact with them for several hundred years," Kyrina added. "The name translates as 'The Prideful Ones'." Their captive rumbled in annoyance. "As if confidence in one's abilities was some kind of crime..." "Bah!" Baren finished gutting the small forest creature he'd caught and jabbed his knife into the ground. "Maybe the 'civilized' lands haven't seen them, but we of the Wind Children have known about these... these *animals* for generations." Kaleen smirked at him. "Indeed you have... for all the good it's done you." The barbarian growled and reached for his spear. "You worthless..." "The great city of Ghali," Kaleen explained, ignoring Baren's rage, "rests in a large desert at the southeastern tip of the Wind Children's territory. They encountered us quite by accident several decades ago. We showed them our culture, our treasures, and our accomplishments, and they repaid us by declaring war." Alaric blinked in surprise. "What, all of them?" "Indeed. But we are also a resourceful people, and despite the many battles, not a single barbarian attack has breached our walls," he finished proudly. "We do have to dig a new pit to bury all the dead Wind Children in every so often, however, otherwise they'd stink up the place even worse-" The point of Baren's spear sank into the tree, a fraction of an inch away from Kaleen's throat. The Child of the Wind glared down at their captive, his single eye burning. "Not one more word out of you, fleabag," he growled. The catman returned his gaze with an icy stare of his own. "Yes, I suppose the only way you *could* kill an al-Kezzin is if he were bound and disarmed..." "That's enough!" Kyrina's shout rang across the clearing. "You can pick fights in your own time, Baren - we've got more important things to worry about right now. Understand?" He bristled. "After he attacked us, you're going to just-" "That's an *order*, Baren. Or is your sworn warrior-name worth nothing?" There was a long, tense moment... then the massive barbarian retrieved his spear and returned his attention to the campfire, pointedly ignoring the prisoner. For his part, Kaleen looked impressed. "To have tamed such a fierce warrior... truly you have powerful magic on your side." Kyrina let out a long breath, then quirked a smile. "He has pledged himself to our cause, the Winds alone know why. Still, he *does* have a point. I don't think we can release you if you're just going to attack him again." The catman rumbled for a moment, his tail twitching with slight agitation. "That is a problem," he admitted. "Perhaps if you simply knocked me unconscious, then went on your way? My tracking skills are keen, but if you get far enough away, I shouldn't be able to follow you." She gave him an odd look. "I have to admit, you're the most helpful and amenable prisoner I've ever seen." Kaleen lifted his head slightly, displaying the expression of supreme dignity common to all cats everywhere. "One must always strive for proper decorum, no matter the situation. I find myself curious, however... what business do you have at the castle?" She hesitated. True, he was unlikely to be a Hereshan spy, but still... "We... just thought there might be some worthwhile treasure left behind when it was abandoned." If the al'Kezzin suspected her of lying, he didn't show it. "I see. Much the same thought occurred to me when I came across this place. Thus far, however, the guardians within have..." He stopped, and lifted his head. "What guardians? I thought-" "Shh." Kaleen turned his head this way and that. "They come." Now the others could hear it - a rustling noise, as of a creature making its way through the underbrush with no concern for stealth. Baren and Alaric stood up and readied their weapons, cautiously moving a bit closer to Kyrina. "What is it?" the barbarian growled. "This castle... it has been the site of many battles, yes?" "You could say that," Kyrina responded, her heart beating faster. The sounds were much louder now. "Within its halls walk the tortured spirits of those who died there. I have entered it several times, and on every occasion they have tried most enthusiastically to add me to their number. They rarely venture this far away - your presence may have alerted them." Alaric gripped his staff tighter. "Spirits?" he quavered. "You mean...?" "Quite so. I refer, of course, to the living dead." The rustling stopped, and then a heartbeat later a large shape rushed forward into the firelight. -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- Davon stood at the balcony, watching the activity in the courtyard below. In the absence of any direct orders, Adele Malespoir had taken to practicing as often as she could, sharpening her skills for future battles. She danced across the torchlit cobblestones, facing off against a pair of soldiers... both of whom, Davon knew, were seasoned warriors. Despite this, she was handling the fight expertly, and to his mind the conclusion was foregone. *Such potential. I can see why they have chosen her for this task... and, of course, she is a Malespoir, which only makes it that much sweeter...* As if echoing his thoughts, a familiar voice behind him said, "She is quite... *driven*, isn't she?" Davon didn't turn around. He didn't need to. "Very much so. In other circumstances, this could have made my task more difficult... but thankfully, she is so blinded by pride that she is grateful for a little guidance." "The rest of the Council was pleased with her, admittedly, but I am a bit uncertain. How is she progressing?" "It's very promising. And, of course, her victory over the bandit leader was something none of us could have foreseen - it was an amazing bit of luck." "Luck." There was a pause. "I don't believe in luck, Davon. It so often turns against one." He nodded slightly, his eyes still fixed on the courtyard; Adele had knocked one of her opponents out of the fight, and was now all but toying with the other. "I understand. Nevertheless, a bit of risk may be acceptable. She has certainly shown that she can handle it." "Hmm." The figure behind him paused briefly, then turned to leave. "I trust it to you, then, to ensure that our prize isn't spoiled before the time is right." "Of course, sir. You will not be disappointed." But the figure was already gone. Below, Adele raised her weapon in triumph. -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- "Ah," Kaleen said brightly. "A revenant. One of their more dangerous and durable members, I've found. Quite vicious, and impervious to pain. One time, I was attacked by two of them, and it was all I could do to-" "*Shut up*, fleabag!" Baren blocked a heavy swipe from the dead soldier's misshapen claws, and essayed a stab of his own. "Save your lectures for when we're not about to be killed!" "I'm sorry, I'm not distracting you at all, am I?" "Undead!" Alaric, noticeably shaking, raised his right hand and sent a gout of flame toward the revenant - it was knocked down by the blast, but soon rose to its feet again. "I really, *really* hate undead!" "Stay focused, Alaric!" Kyrina fired an arrow into the zombie's neck, which had little effect. "We can't let it- uugh!" Her sentence went unfinished as the revenant struck her side - the archer fell to the ground and rolled a full ten feet before stopping. "Kyrina!" Baren rushed in and, with a quick swipe of his spear, hamstrung the undead soldier. The sudden loss of muscle tissue was enough to disorient and unbalance the creature, and it dropped into an ungraceful heap... but it soon began to pick itself up. Alaric, meanwhile, had gone swiftly to Kyrina's side. After a brief check of her status, he looked up at Baren. "She's out of it for now, but she'll be okay. If we live." "Dammit..." "Both of you, run!" They turned to look at Kaleen, still tied to the tree. "If you try to escape, the revenant will turn its attention to me instead. Take your friend and go!" "We can't just leave you here!" Alaric protested. "You must!" For a brief moment, the al'Kezzin allowed a smirk to flash across his face. "Besides, I'd rather die to the revenant than endure the Wind Child's stench much longer." Baren growled in anger. "I *told* you..." he said, pulling a knife from his belt. "...to *shut*..." He lifted the knife, then hurled it toward the catman with precision accuracy. "...*UP!*" The knife spun through the air, and Kaleen's eyes grew wide... until the blade sank into the tree, severing the rope that secured him. He pulled the ropes away from him and stood up, staring at the barbarian in confusion. "Why...?" "You know how to fight these things," Baren said curtly. "We don't. Get your weapon and do something, or we're *all* dead!" As if to emphasize the point, the revenant got to its feet and lunged at the Wind Child. The wound to its legs did little to slow it down, and Baren was forced to take several steps backward in order to defend himself. Kaleen wasted no time and sprinted to the other side of the fire, where his scimitar was resting on a stump. Snatching it up, he turned back around and advanced on the revenant. "Aim for its joints," he shouted. "If we can disable them, we'll be able to finish it off." Without a word, Baren smashed the zombie away with the haft of his spear and assumed a more aggressive stance. He stabbed forward, and the spearhead sliced into the revenant's forearm, mere inches away from its wrist. He cursed and pulled his weapon back, waiting for another opening. After making sure Kyrina was safely out of the way, Alaric raised his staff and pressed the attack, having already expended what fire magic he could manage. While the beast's back was turned, he lifted his weapon above his head and charged. "Dammit, why don't you things just stay DEAD?!" He swung the weapon down with all his might... ...which, unfortunately, was not enough to break the revenant's shoulder upon impact. The zombie turned and advanced on the trembling mage, who took an involuntary step backwards. Then Kaleen was there, slicing across the creature's ribs - a seemingly pointless attack, but one that attracted the revenant's attention. "Strive for accuracy, young one!" He dodged out of the way of another attack, then swung his blade in a swift arc that ended in a jolt as it impacted bone. "Hah!" Baren sneered at him, readying for another attack. "You're one to talk, fleabag! Watch how it's done!" He stabbed forward, a move that connected with the revenant's elbow. Thick black blood dripped from the wound, and the arm flopped a bit before the zombie regained control. "I am watching, yet I do not see." Kaleen moved in, taking the other side. "*This* is how a true warrior does it!" His scimitar flashed, and the revenant's left claw fell to the ground. "Pathetic! My grandmother could hit harder!" The undead soldier had not yet recovered from Kaleen's attack, which left it wide open for Baren's stab. A moment later, its arm hung uselessly at its side. "Well, at least *someone* in your family has some strength!" Another slice, and the arm was completely severed. Alaric paused in his attack, watching the two warriors in bemusement. "Is this what's been holding you up all this time? I would've cleared the castle out by now!" "I'm sure you would - your breath would have driven them off before you reached the front gate!" "At least I have the stomach for a *real* battle, unlike you and the rest of your mange-ridden kind!" "Stomach, you have in great quantities, but courage and skill are another matter!" "Pah! You're just afraid to admit that a 'barbarian' has a greater warrior spirit than you'll ever have!" "Enough!" A final slice from Kaleen's blade sent the revenant's head bouncing off into the darkness, but he didn't seem to notice as he stepped over its body to glare at Baren from inches away. "I think it's time we settled who the *real* warrior is here!" "Fine by me! Let's get this over with!" "Prepare to-!" "Guys! GUYS!" Alaric forced his way between them and held them apart - an impressive feat, as they both outweighed him by a considerable margin. "It's dead! You both killed it! Good job! So stop fighting!" They continued to glare at each other, the adrenalin slowly fading... then they turned around at the same time, each pretending that the other was beneath their notice. A moan off to the side caught their attention, but they relaxed when they saw who it was. "Winds above, I'll feel that tomorrow..." Kyrina stood up, clutching at her side... then blinked in surprise as she saw the revenant's body lying motionless on the ground. "What just happened?" Since the others didn't seem likely to explain, Alaric cleared his throat. "After you fell, Baren freed Kaleen, and together they took it down. It was pretty impressive." "I see." She nudged the zombie with her boot, then seemed to make a decision. "All right, let's head back to the ruins." "What? But... we just got here. Not only that, but my horse bolted during the fight..." "It doesn't matter. Our orders were to come back if we ran into any problems. Call me crazy, but I think this thing counts as such, especially if there are more like it." Alaric hesitated. "...that's a good point. And if there's a lot of undead in one place, there's usually someone or something leading them, in my experience. They're generally not very well-organized." "Besides, I'll be happier when we're a bit further away from this place." She gently prodded her ribs then, apparently satisfied that nothing was broken, raised her voice. "Let's go, Baren. We should at least get to the other side of the lake before we make camp." "Hmph." He retrieved his knife from the tree and shouldered his pack. Kyrina turned to Kaleen. "Well, you don't seem to be at each other's throats right now... I suppose we'll call it even. Thank you for helping us, though. We'll be on our way now." He absently scratched behind one ear with a fingertip. "Actually... I'm of a mind to accompany you, if you'll let me." She raised an eyebrow. "Oh, really? You don't know a thing about us or why we're here, you obviously have a grudge against Baren, we tied you *up*... and you want to come along with us? Just like that?" Kaleen grinned a toothy grin. "Precisely like that, O Bountiful Oasis of Sarcasm. When the Seriph of Ghali gave me permission to leave home, he requested that I find out about the world. I think I may accomplish that better by coming with you - if only briefly - than by trying and failing to enter this castle. "Besides," he added, glancing at Baren, "your companion seems to be, of all things, a barbarian that understands honor... if only slightly. I would be remiss if I let such an opportunity for study slip through my fingers." She considered his words carefully. "Well... you *do* have some unique knowledge about the current state of the castle..." A long moment passed, then she shrugged. "We'll bring you back to our commander and let her decide. I can't guarantee anything." Kaleen bowed, his tail curling ornately behind him. "That is more than this unworthy servant could ask for." -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- From the highest room in White Cloud, clad in bloodstained armor, it felt rather than watched them leave. So. They were leaving. But there would be more, it was sure. Another invasion, instead of the single warrior attempting to work his way in. But it knew how to deal with invasions. After all, it had been born of the screams and the clash of metal that had accompanied a hundred attacks - it welcomed the chance to test its skill against worthy foes. It looked forward to sharing its pain with them. -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- STARS ADDED: Kaleen ibn'Ashra (Chisyu star) AUTHOR'S NOTES: Well, that was interesting. ^_^; I might sign up again later, I might not. Dunno at this point. But, though this is a short and rather pointless chapter (or possibly because of it), for once I managed to do everything I'd planned to. I had a bunch of things I was thinking of saying, but right at the moment they don't seem terribly important. One comment about Baren, though: since his rather *ahem* lackluster introduction, he hasn't been given much in the way of personality. There isn't even a description of him, except for the scar around his missing eye. So, with him in the scouting group, I basically had to build him from scratch. I dunno about everyone else, but I've kinds visualized him as the big, beefy, Genghis Khan-kinda barbarian, so that's how I wrote him in. Of course, it's no big deal to leave a minor character in the background - we don't need to flesh out all 108 stars - as long as the main characters remain in the spotlight. Mad propz to Illyria for prereading, and a ball-peen hammer set to the side in case she ever tries to put me in this situation again. ^_^;;;;; Now to see if I can finish Starburst Crystal. In one day. Gah. - Brian Stricklin